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arguementative essay(outline)

Arguementative essay

Introduction. (1 paragraph)

Position : agree

Thesis statement : the reasons why I agree that  a wedding should cost not more than RM20,000 is that such move can help me prevent wastage, I can save my money for future use,  and I can use the money for charity.

Body(4 paragraph)

1.       Firstly, I can prevent a wastage if I choose to conduct a weeding that cost not more than RM20,000.

A.      I learn how to recycle dais,

B.      Borrow other people stuff.friends.other family members.

C.      More economical

2.       Secondly, I can save money for future usage.

A.      Use the money for buy new home.

B.      For my children and life expenses.

3.       Thirdly, I can use the money for the charity.

A.      Help who a more needy.

B.      Use for zakat,

4.       However, people may say that a wedding should course more than RM20,000 they argue that  you cannot estimate the exact budget of a wedding and prices of goods have increase.

A.      In my opinion a person must make a thorough planning of the budget before the wedding, so that that they would not over spend.

B.      We also must choose wisely to buy the things

Coclusion.(1 paragraph)

Restatement the thesis.

coorperate with 3 topic sentence.

I final coment,suggestion,hope,

journal entry #4

The arcticle that i have read is
http://thestar.com.my/metro/story.asp?file=/2011/8/19/central/9260976&sec=central

My respon after read this arcticle is, i think this is good suggestion from goverment to overcome the problem of unemployment. With this the school dropouts can looking for their job and build their future. In this way, they will not be ignored by the educated community. They also have a future. with this kind of institution, they they will be exposed to various skills of bakery. In my opinion, the goverment should continue this program.

journal entry #3

The arcticle that i have read is

 http://newsfeed.time.com/2011/08/18/triple-double-oreo-arrives-begins-attack-on-americas-waistline/

My respon about this arcticle is i can't wait to buy this new product. Because according to this link i can feel the tasteness of this biscuit. As u can see at the new different layer of oreo. Makes me eager to try it. Although it is not healthy food is not wrong if we try it. I think we cannot to eat this snack more often. I guaranteed the that children will love it. So,the parents at outsider must get ready to wait for new outcome of this snack.

journal article #2

The arcticle that i have read
http://www.nst.com.my/nst/articles/elf27a/Article/

My opinion about this arcticle is this are good way for students to avoid the obesity. This also good to teach the students to take the healthy food since they child. So.they know the differences between good and bad food. This Education Ministry way is good to reveal the healthy generation.

journal article again..  :)

journal article again :)