Thursday, 30 June 2011

practice exercise #1 pg 29

Politicians should utilise the internet for their election campaigns.
  • to get more closer to to the public.
  • because internet is more faster to spread the information
  • because if the use internet we can save budget.
Text messaging has caused the deterioration of proper english usage.
  • because the use of short form in the text messages
  • because the use of mix language
  • because the use of the wrong spelling at most of time.

With the emergence of the multi purpose phones, ipods and digital cameras may soon be obsolete
  • because of their limited function.
  • this is because the come out of more powerful function of  the new latest gadget.
  • this also because the changing trend from time to time.

Thesis statement 1: Politicians should utilise the internet for their election campaigns to get more closer to the public, internet is more faster to spread information and to save cost.

Thesis statement 2: Text messaging has caused the deterioration of proper English usage because the use of short form, use of mix language and wrong spelling.

Thesis statement 3: With the emergence of multi purpose phones, ipods and digital cameras may soon be obsolete because their limited function, the come out of more powerful function of the new latest gadget and the changing trend from time to time.

journal entry #1

The article that i have read

My opinion about this arcticle is we should ask advise from doctor before doing something that we don't know the effect.If we drink this beverages we opened to get more disease that can damage your brain.I think we should avoid this diet drinks and get excercise to become more healthy and also can live longer.

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